Correção de texto: Why do you want to speak English?

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Avatar do usuário Filipe Hudson
Olá Pessoal, gostaria que pudessem corrigir este texto que escrevi. Estou começando a escrever em Inglês e gostaria muito das dicas pra melhorar. Desde já agradeço!!!

Why I want to speak English? Well, that's a long story.
Since I was a little kid, I liked to pretend that I was an american actor in interviews, (I didn't speak English yet, so I was a child speaking a weird language that didn't exist).

At that time I used to study with old English books from school and I only knew the meaning of many words, but I didn't know how pronounce them and use the correct grammar.

Now, about two years, I've been studying English and learning how to pronounce and use grammar. I like to study languages and I'm learning English because I want to live in the U.S.A, but it's more than this, English is an International Language, almost the whole world speaks English. So, it's not just about improving my resumé, it's about learning new cultures and see the world in a different point of view.

That's all!

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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 30925 22 51 643
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Why do I want to speak English? Well, that's a long story.
When I was a little kid, I liked to pretend that I was an American actor in interviews, (I couldn't speak English yet, so I was a child speaking a weird language that didn't exist).

At that time, I used to study with old English books from school and I knew the meaning of many words, but I didn't know how to pronounce them and use them correctly.

I've been studying English for two years and learning how to pronounce and use grammar. I like to study languages and I'm learning English because I want to live in the U.S.A, but it's more than this, English is an International Language, almost the whole world speaks English. So, it's not just about improving my resumé, it's about learning new cultures and see the world in a different point of view.

Avatar do usuário Filipe Hudson
Brigadão Donay!!!

Isso com certeza deixou o texto mais claro e limpo.

Só mais uma pergunta.....havia muito erro gramatical no texto? OU a correção foi pra dar uma "limpada" pra deixar mais claro a ideia do texto?

Muito obrigado novamente.

Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 30925 22 51 643
Só mais uma pergunta.....havia muito erro gramatical no texto? OU a correção foi pra dar uma "limpada" pra deixar mais claro a ideia do texto?


A correção serviu para dar uma limpada e deixar mais claro.

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