Fórum de Inglês - English Experts

[aluisiomaia]

A proposta é o seguinte: Que tal contarmos uma história em inglês? Cada um contribuiria com um pequeno trecho, e o criador do primeiro trecho, quando achasse que seria o sufiente direcionaria a história para o fim. E os professores de plantão poderiam fazer as devidas correções, é claro. Só peço para separarem comentários e história, dessa forma, poderíamos padronizar comentários escritos em Português. O que acham?

Lá vai o primeiro trecho:

He was dirt. Dirt with the deepest red blood. And in his mind he couldn't figure out what happened. In his right hand, a knife showing this rage in blood and behind him a dead body of a young bealtiful lady, surrounded by blood, the deepest red blood. He thought he would never been there, but some of the objects were familiar. He wondered what a hell he was doing there...

[aluisiomaia]

...in that dark house, covered by dust. Outside the window, a silent and hot jungle. Was he in another country?

[donay mendonça]

Olá Aluisiomaia,

Ai vai:

All of a sudden he realized that he was dreaming and that reality was going to be over,then he headed for the forest trying to reflect on what he should´ve done and what he could´ve avoided...


I hope it´s good enough...