Van-Spirandeo escreveu:Marcia is the name that comes to mind. She was a great teacher, knew when to push and when to let go, was always motivating her students. Taking tests in her class, for me, was a whole different experience, cause all I wanted was to show that very special teacher that I had learned and absorved every single word she had tought us.
Not only was she a great teacher, but also it was her encouraging attitude towards me (even defying at times! Daring me to go further!) that made me go for English as a career.
Thanks, Marcia!!
If I may, I would like to offer a few suggestions in the form of a rewrite, and get your honest and frank opinion of what you think.
"Marcia is the name that comes to mind. She was a great teacher, knew when to push and when to let go, and was always motivating her students. Taking tests in her class was for me a whole different experience, because all I wanted was to show that very special teacher that I had learned and absorbed every single word that she had taught us.
Not only was she a great teacher, but her encouraging attitude towards me, at times defying and daring me to go further, convinced me to make teaching English my career.
Thanks, Marcia!!"I realize that some of the changes are nitpicking, however with the quality of your writing that is the only way that I can see to offer suggested improvements. Furthermore, I do not speak the Queens English only American (the correct

)English, so any suggestions would apply to American English.
Bill Slayman
Pensacola, Florida (Native English Speaker, USA)
w.slayman@cox.netPlease contact me by e-mail or Skype (user name billslayman)PLEASE correct my errors, both english and especially
Portuguese.
Muito Obrigado, Minhas Amigas e Meus Amigos