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Real life or just illusion?
Everything seems so confusing
And o matter what you do
They always hurt your mind

Sometimes you try to break free
Spread your wings to fly forever
throw away this poison and thorns that they put in your heart

Sometimes I try to get away
But there's no way escape out of here
because they took my eyes and also chained my wings

So I'm just trying to understand
Will I be here forever lost?
in doubts with this hell inside my head
I'm searching for you

You never felt this way before
Your mind seems drowned in madness
You need some peace of mind or you will surely die
Life is an evil and hard game this circle never ending
You know I was so close but heart seems so far

So wings of reality just you can save us now
Fly away until the infinity
and bring us light some how

Until the moment that you came to us
You brought deliverance for all your people
hear our calling again

POWER QUESTIONS
O professor das celebridades Daniel Bonatti ensina várias técnicas para você ter conversas melhores mesmo com conhecimentos básicos de inglês. Com as power questions você vai aprender a direcionar a conversa para onde quiser e com isso alcançar seus objetivos na comunicação. ACESSAR AULA
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Real life or just illusion?
Everything seems so confusing
And no matter what you do
They always hurt your mind

Sometimes you try to break free
Spread your wings to fly forever
throw away this poison and thorns that they put in your heart

Sometimes I try to get away
But there's no way out of here
because they took my eyes and also chained my wings

So I'm just trying to understand
Will I be here forever lost?
in doubts with this hell inside my head
I'm looking for you

You never felt this way before
Your mind seems drowned in madness
You need some peace of mind or you will surely die
Life is an evil and hard game, a never-ending circle

So wings of reality just you can save us now
Fly away until the infinity
and bring us light somehow

Until the moment that you came to us
You brought deliverance to all your people
hear our call again