Correção de texto: Marine Life

My whole life I was interested about sea animals. Unfortunately, the universities which there is sea biology course is so far away. The ocean contains just 30% explored and recently they found many ancient animals that before were considered extinct. The Coelacanth one gave origin into some land animals, I mean, some Dinosaur species, but this fish still exist and didn't change since back then. There are many interesting species on the deep water that we still don't have much information about. The ocean is so mysterious.

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Ancrispa 9 55
My whole life I’ve been interested in sea animals. Unfortunately, the universities that have deep sea biology course are so far away.

We have only explored 30% of oceans. Researchers have recently found many ancient animals that before were considered extinct.

Among these species is the Coelacanth fish, which represents an early step in the evolution of fish to terrestrial four-legged animals like amphibians. (National Geographic- see link below).

There are many interesting deep-water species that we still don’t have much information about. The ocean is so mysterious.


Bullet points:
My whole life I’ve been interested in cats.
Why the present perfect? Because I’m still interested in cats.
We have only explored – present perfect- why?
Because there’s still 70% to explore….

http://vertebrates.si.edu/fishes/coelac ... wider.html

I've copied the information from here:

http://animals.nationalgeographic.com/a ... oelacanth/
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Ancrispa 9 55
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