Correção de Textos: Coherence (Film)
Can someone review my text?
There is no spoilers about the movie.
"I would like suggest you to watch the Coherence. It is a 2013 Sci-fi thriller film that wasn't exhibited on Brazilian theaters, and this is why it is not much known here.
The plot is about four friend couples who go to a dinner party at the night that a comet is passing near from the earth, causing strangest phenomenons.
The film keep the audience's attention from the beggining to the end, just the finale was a little poor."
Thanks.
There is no spoilers about the movie.
"I would like suggest you to watch the Coherence. It is a 2013 Sci-fi thriller film that wasn't exhibited on Brazilian theaters, and this is why it is not much known here.
The plot is about four friend couples who go to a dinner party at the night that a comet is passing near from the earth, causing strangest phenomenons.
The film keep the audience's attention from the beggining to the end, just the finale was a little poor."
Thanks.
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" I would like TO suggest you to watch the Coherence. It is a 2013 Sci-fi thriller film that wasn't exhibited IN Brazilian theaters, and this is why it is not KNOWN HERE THAT MUCH.
The plot is about four friend couples, who go to a dinner party ON A night that a comet is passing near TO the earth AND IT´S causing THE strangest phenomenons.
The film KEEPS the audience's attention from the BEGINNING to the end, THOUGH ITS finale was a little poor. "
" I would like TO suggest you to watch the Coherence. It is a 2013 Sci-fi thriller film that wasn't exhibited IN Brazilian theaters, and this is why it is not KNOWN HERE THAT MUCH.
The plot is about four friend couples, who go to a dinner party ON A night that a comet is passing near TO the earth AND IT´S causing THE strangest phenomenons.
The film KEEPS the audience's attention from the BEGINNING to the end, THOUGH ITS finale was a little poor. "
Hi folks!
Apenas complementando.
Use phenomena in plural. It's a Greek word ending with an "a", such as the pair datum/data (singular and plural).
check that here
Cheers!
Apenas complementando.
Use phenomena in plural. It's a Greek word ending with an "a", such as the pair datum/data (singular and plural).
check that here
Cheers!
I would suggest "from beggining to end." instead of ''from the beggining to the end".
Just another suggestion guys, that'd be ''There are no spoilers about the movie'' not ''There is no spoilers about the movie'' It's quite important,
Take care
Take care
Yep, whale of a sense indeed.
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Thank you very much folks!
I think I learned something with your suggestions.
I think I learned something with your suggestions.
I´m glad that it helped, that´s the spirit over here, and we (at least I speak for me - and many others I guess) learn a lot around here as well.