Correção da música "Love" (de minha autoria)

Olá! Estou praticando um pouco de inglês e gostaria que vocês corrigissem a letra de música que eu escrevi. Obrigada!

Walking around here
I remember about the times
When the sun shone out
And you were the one
And I´d needed anybody else
We´ll never be apart
I know you should be
I know you want me
I know you care
Stop pretending bad feelings
I want more
Everything´s worths it now

Walking around here
I remember the times / I remember those times / I remember how it was
When the sun shined down
And you were the one
And I´d needed nobody else
We´ll never be apart
I know you should be (needs to be re-written)
I know you want me
I know you care
Stop pretending you don't love me
I want more
Everything´s worth it now

Write some more! This is a great way to learn.