Correção de cartão postal para uma amiga em inglês

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Hi everybody! I'd like if someone pretty good on grammar could help me. If I
made any mistake on this postcard, I 'd like to know. Thank's in advance!

Dear Catherine,

I'm in Paris with my sister. There are a lot of great hotels here, but most of
them are really expensive. We are in a intermediate one. It's not that
luxuous, but it's a little more cheaper. The weather here is great: it's cool
and windy. We arrived yesterdayat 10:30pm. It was a little late, so we
decided go to the hotel and get some sleep. Tonight, we are going to visit
the Louvre museum,one of the most famous museums in the world.I called
your early, you were not in home. Your mother said that you will take
vacations next week. You can come to Paris if you want, we will be here for
the next months.

See you soon,

Love,

Rick and Patricia
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
Sugestões de correção:

I'm in Paris with my sister. There are a lot of great hotels here, but most of
them are really expensive. We are in an average one. It's not that
luxurious and it's a little cheaper. The weather here is great: it's cool
and windy. We arrived yesterday at 10:30pm. It was a little late, so we
decided go to the hotel and get some sleep. Tonight, we are going to visit
the Louvre museum, one of the most famous museums in the world. I called
you early but you were not at home. Your mother said that you will take
a vacation next week. You can come to Paris if you want, we will be here for
the next months.
Avatar do usuário mlm 25
Thank you Donay.
Avatar do usuário mlm 25
Donay, só para confirmar:

1-"Louvre museum" está correto mesmo? Não seria "Louvre Museum"?

2-"so we decided go to" está correto? Não seria "so we decided to go to?

3-"I called you early but you were not at home" - não seria "I called you earlier but you were not at home"?

4-"10:30pm" está correto mesmo?

Me desculpe pela quantidade de perguntas, é que eu gostaria de mecertificar que meu texto não contém erros gramaticais. Muito obrigado pela ajuda!
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
MLM,

Suas correções finais estão boas. Como foi dito na primeira mensagem, são feitas algumas correções.

-"Louvre museum" está correto mesmo? Não seria "Louvre Museum"?

2-"so we decided go to" está correto? Não seria "so we decided to go to?

3-"I called you early but you were not at home" - não seria "I called you earlier but you were not at home"?


4. 10 p.m.
(forma correta).



Abraços,