Correção de diálago "Two friends"

Bom, vou improvisar um diálago entre dois amigos ! Vamos ver como fica ! Hehe !
Os personagens vão se chamar [1] e [2], hehe !

[1]: Heeey, boy ! What's up ?
[2]: What's up, bro !
[1]: What you're doing here, man ?
[2]: Actually, nothing ! I'm just thinking about my life, you know.
[1]: Yeah, I do.
[1]: So, man... I'm dating, now !
[2]: Oh, really ? Man, that's awesome !
[1]: Yeah, I know. And now, it's for real !
[2]: Great, great... Tell me about her ! Is she cool ? Is she beautiful ?
[1]: Yeah, she is, man ! Her name is Rose ! She lives in Manhattan !
[2]: Wooow, she has money !
[1]: Yeeah, but doesn't matter ! I'm falling in love with her !
[2] Haaaahaha ! So, are you still playing drum ?
[1]: Of course, man ! Haha, I will never stop. I told ya !
[2]: Cool, cool. Do you have a band ?
[1]: No, I don't... But I'm searching for !
[2]: Great, great !
[2]: Well, I gotta go, now . I gotta go work ! See ya, man !
[1]: See ya !

That's it, guys !
Hope you like it !
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[1]: Heeey, buddy ! What's up ?
[2]: What's up, bro?
[1]: What are you doing here, man ?
[2]: Nothing ! I'm just thinking about my life, you know. --> acho que "Actually" não se encaixa nesse ambiente
[1]: Yeah, I do.
[1]: So, man... I'm dating, now !
[2]: Oh, really ? Man, that's awesome !
[1]: Yeah, I know. And now, it's for real !
[2]: Great, great... Tell me about her ! Is she cool ? Is she beautiful ?
[1]: Yeah, she is, man ! Her name is Rose ! She lives in Manhattan !
[2]: Wooow, she has money !
[1]: Yeeah, but it doesn't matter ! I'm falling in love with her !
[2] Haaaahaha ! So, do you still play drums ?
[1]: Of course, man ! Haha, I will never stop. I told ya !
[2]: Cool, cool. Do you have a band ?
[1]: No, I don't... But I'm looking for one!
[2]: Great, great !
[2]: Well, I gotta go, now . I gotta go to work ! See ya, man !
[1]: See ya !


;) Minha suggestão
Valew, cara !

Deu pra me corrigir bastante ! Hehe !

Abraços !