Correção de diálogo: Hi, Madison. It's Mary.How are you doing?

juevelin 70 1
Hello!
Eu gostaria de saber se está correto o diálogo que eu criei e se consegui colocar Simple Present e Present continuous direito/corretamente. Eu criei duas amigas conversando no telefone.
Diálogo:
Mary: Hi, Madison. It's Mary. How are you doing?
Madison: Hello, Mary. I'm great. How about you?
Mary: I'm good.Where are you now?
Madison: I'm on my way to work.
Mary: What time do you leave work?
Madison: I leave work at 6 p.pm.Why?
Mary: Do you want to watch movies in my house?
Madison: Yes, I do. What are you doing now?
Mary: Today I don't work. So I'm reading a book. And later I'm making pizzas for us tonight.
Madison: It's great.I'll bring some beer.

Agradeço deste já pela ajuda.
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Leonardo96 6990 11 156
Mary: Hi, Madison. It's Mary. How are you doing?
Madison: Hello, Mary. I'm great. What about you?
Mary: I'm good.Where are you right now?
Madison: I'm on my way to work.
Mary: What time do you get off work?
Madison: I get off work at 6 p.pm.Why?
Mary: Do you want to watch movies in my place?
Madison: Yes, I do. What are you doing right now?
Mary: I'm not working today. So I'm reading a book. And later I'm making pizzas for us tonight. ("Making pizzas?" Making? Pizzas? Do people make pizza instead of ordering? And pizzas? Plural? I'm not sure about this. Doesn't sound natural. I'd just say "I'll order a pizza for us tonight".
Madison: Great.I'll bring some beer.
juevelin 70 1
Eu já vi a youtuber Zoella que é britânica fazendo pizza com os amigos.