Correção de diálogo "Where do you live? ..."
- Bruno FV
- Membro desde: 20 Jan 2011, 19:57
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Com base em um exercício proposto pelo site InglesJa.com, eu escrevi um texto somente com diálogos com base em algumas frases já determinadas no exercício passado. Um homem e uma mulher dialogando.
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- So... where do you live?
- I living in a house.
- Really?
- I'm kidding. You want eat something?
- I want a apple.
- There are. I can ask you something?
- Sure.
- What's the best thing in your life?
- The best thing in my life is love, ever.
- And... what are you like to eat?
- I like eat bread with cheese.
- Know... i'm think i love you. And i can't live without you.
- Me too.
- So... about you daugther... how old she is?
- She is nine years old. She is young, but very intelligent.
- Just a daugther?
- No... i have a son too. She is eleven years old. He loves football and food.
- I'm always right...
- About what?
- Nevermind... so... I think it's time for bed.
- But... it's 20:00pm... Oww! Now i get it.
- Glad you are beautiful.
- Why?
- Because you brain is very slow.
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- So... where do you live?
- I living in a house.
- Really?
- I'm kidding. You want eat something?
- I want a apple.
- There are. I can ask you something?
- Sure.
- What's the best thing in your life?
- The best thing in my life is love, ever.
- And... what are you like to eat?
- I like eat bread with cheese.
- Know... i'm think i love you. And i can't live without you.
- Me too.
- So... about you daugther... how old she is?
- She is nine years old. She is young, but very intelligent.
- Just a daugther?
- No... i have a son too. She is eleven years old. He loves football and food.
- I'm always right...
- About what?
- Nevermind... so... I think it's time for bed.
- But... it's 20:00pm... Oww! Now i get it.
- Glad you are beautiful.
- Why?
- Because you brain is very slow.
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- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
- Localização: Morrinhos - Goiás
- Membro desde: 15 Abr 2008, 00:47
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Bruno,
Algumas sugestões de melhoria:
- So... where do you live?
- I live in a house.
- Really?
- I'm kidding. You want to eat something?
- I want an apple.
- Here you are. Can I ask you something?
- Sure.
- What's the best thing in your life?
- The best thing in my life is love, always.
- And... what do you like to eat?
- I like to eat bread and cheese.
- You know, I think I love you. And I can't live without you.
- Me too.
- So...what about you daugther... how old is she?
- She is nine years old. She is young, but very intelligent.
- Just one daughter?
- No... I have a son too. He is eleven years old. He loves football and food.
- I'm always right...
- About what?
- Never mind... so... I think it's time for bed.
- But... it's 20:00pm... Oww! Now I get it.
- Glad you are beautiful.
- Why?
- Because your brain is very slow.
Algumas sugestões de melhoria:
- So... where do you live?
- I live in a house.
- Really?
- I'm kidding. You want to eat something?
- I want an apple.
- Here you are. Can I ask you something?
- Sure.
- What's the best thing in your life?
- The best thing in my life is love, always.
- And... what do you like to eat?
- I like to eat bread and cheese.
- You know, I think I love you. And I can't live without you.
- Me too.
- So...what about you daugther... how old is she?
- She is nine years old. She is young, but very intelligent.
- Just one daughter?
- No... I have a son too. He is eleven years old. He loves football and food.
- I'm always right...
- About what?
- Never mind... so... I think it's time for bed.
- But... it's 20:00pm... Oww! Now I get it.
- Glad you are beautiful.
- Why?
- Because your brain is very slow.
