Correção de diálogo "Would you like a coffee?" [en>en]

Hello.
I need help to revise this text below.
-Would you like a coffee?
- Ok let’s go
-How are you Andre?
-I’m fine and you.
-I’m OK. And your study at university. It’s good
-Yes. Good.
- You are alredy despont unde have to go school every day.
- No. Yesterday we had a fine debate.
- About that
- Paranormal Psychology, each of person said about heir’s point of view.
- Good.
-What’s difference among psychologist and psychiatrist?
-The psychiatrist usually make the treatment with drugs. Illness mental that need of drug for cure.
-The Psychologist help you find a way or better help you to resolve mental conflicts.

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Donay Mendonça 23 127 1.7k
Olá Pessoal,

Sugestões para complemento:

a)How are your studies going at university?(Como vão os estudos na universidade?)
b)Despondent
c)Expressed their point of view/Gave their opinion/Talked about their point of view
d)Cope with mental conflicts

Bons estudos!
Henry Cunha 3 18 190
Olá Guisouzarego:

Um trecho bem confuso, mas acho que pode ser redigido assim:

-Would you like a coffee?
- Ok, let’s go (está certo, mas disconectado do anterior)
-How are you, Andre?
-I’m fine and you.
-I’m OK. And your study at university. It’s good? (it´s going well? seria mais adequado)
-Yes. Good.
- You already seem despodent about having to go school every day.
- No. Yesterday we had a fine debate.
- About what?
- Paranormal Psychology. Each person gave (his) their point of view.
- Good.
-What’s the difference between a psychologist and a psychiatrist?
-The psychiatrist usually treats with drugs. For mental Illness that needs drugs for cure.
-The Psychologist helps you find a way or offers help for you to resolve mental conflicts.

Regards