Correção de email "Fired from your job"

Dear friend

I heard you got fired from your job, and you are very sad, so I am writing this email for you. I know It´s hard losing a job but you can´t be sad ans depressed.

But dear friend don´t worry, everything well work out. I thing you were working a lot and you didn´t have much time to go out with your friends and relax.

It´s necessary the you have as positive thinking and now is as good opportunity for you to improve your qualifications to find a new job and you make new courses.

I had an idea, would youlike me to go to visit you? I can help you at this time, we could go to the concert of our favorite band, go out with friends, go out to walk along the beach or simply talk.

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Olá Gabriela. Sugestões e correções para seu e-mail:

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Dear friend,

I heard you got fired from your job, and that you are very sad, so I am writing you this email. I know losing a job is hard but you can't be sad and depressed.

Dear friend, don't worry. (I'm sure) everything will work out (for the best). I think you were working a lot and you didn't have much time to go out with your friends and relax.

It's necessary that you stay positive / think positively. Besides, now is a good opportunity for you to improve your qualifications and take new courses before you find a new job.

I've had an idea. Would you like me to go and visit you? I can help you through this. We could go to our favorite band's concert, go out with (our) friends, go for a walk along the beach or simply talk.

(Best regards,
Gabriela)

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