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Cinnamon escreveu:Hi edrob518 just sth a missed the first time I replied, and maybe some tips:
"... differences of social class, size, religion, appearance, reputation, etc. As for signs of bullying suffered by the victim, is change in his/ her behaviour, anxiety, irritability, unwillingness to go to school, these are according to some parents depoiments statements/testimonies the main signs seen. One thing that parents need to keep in mind is the teachers are not the ones to blame for their child being suffering bullying the bullying suffered by their child (or) the bullying their child has been suffering. It is both parents' role and school to make sure their children are OK/all right/treated well and are not getting into trouble. In my opinion, the most effective way to prevent and lessen bullying is the increase of safety at schools."
Note: Just to share something with you:
-Look up for collocations to improve the quality of your writing that is quite good. Sometimes you can be understood but the language is not natural;
-Avoid some contractions if your text is not that informal. "All right", for example, is slightly less informal when compared to "OK". "Treated well" is more formal.
Keep up the good work!