Hello, I'm new at this forum and I need help with the essay below, Thank you.
"Okay, now I will revise all study strategies, one by one.
In overall, this is a really good strategy. I never used the mind maps, so I cant give my opinion about that. Use books, as well videos, graphs, maps and computer programs, is also a nice idea. Have discipline - for example, not sitting near windows or door - is vital for your study!
Discuss the class topics with classmates is something very interesting. Also, say out loud vocabulary words - and essays - at home is a perfect idea. Keep doing that!
Take dinamic classes - trips to museums, scientific tests and so on - is a awesome idea, since you are going to learn different types of situations and how to speak in each one, as well as learn their vocabulary.
Is there anything wrong with this essay?? If yes, what is it?
PS: My english level is Intermediate