Correção de frase: My duties in my last job

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Gostaria de saber se a minha resposta para seguinte pergunta está ok ...se há algo errado ou estranho, please let me know! :)
Thanks!

Q: What were your duties in your last job? Tell about it.
A: I've worked for a company which produces axles for trucks. I used to work at a computer most of the time, writing reports, making spreadsheets, general paperwork. I also answered phone calls to my department and put it through to the right person.
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Q: What were your duties in your last job? Tell (us?) about it.
A: I worked for a company that produces axles for trucks. I used to spend most of the time in the computer, writing reports, making spreadsheets and dealing with general paperwork. I was also responsible for answering phone calls to my department and putting them through to the right person.[/quote]

As coisas que eu mudei não estavam necessariamente erradas, mas acho que dessa forma o texto soa melhor.

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Avatar do usuário Juliana Rios 18840 21 98 389
Thais, minha correção (não há muito o que corrigir do meu ponto de vista. Seu inglês é muito bom):

Q: What were your duties in your last job? Tell us about them:
A: I've worked for a company which produces axles for trucks. I used to work at a computer most of the time, writing reports, making spreadsheets and dealing with general paperwork. I also answered phone calls to my department and put them through to the right person.
Avatar do usuário Juliana Rios 18840 21 98 389
Artful, postamos ao mesmo tempo!