Correção de "frases em inglês - entrevista de emprego" - 2

Por favor, vocês poderiam me ajudar com a correção destas frases referente a entrevista de emprego? Obrigada.

1)I am a punctual and polite person and I work well in Group.
2)I worked for two years in the computer room of the school, where I was studying as an intern of the “programa acessa escola”
3)I took both of them (os idiomas inglês e espanhol) at “Centro de Estudos de Línguas”. It’s is a program of Education Secretariat of the Government of the State of São Paulo, which offers students the chance to learn a second foreign language.
4)Because, I’m good at in two languages, and I like to deal with people. (lidar, trabalhar no atendimento a pessoas).
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Sugestões de correção/melhoria:

)I am punctual, polite and I am a team player.
2)I worked for two years in the computer room of a school where I studied as an intern of the “programa acessa escola”.
3)I took both English and Spanish at “Centro de Estudos de Línguas”. It’s an education program created by the São Paulo State Government which offers students the chance to learn a second language.
4)Because I’m good at both languages and I like to deal with people.


''A team player is an employee who is comfortable working with others and makes an effort to get along.'' - wisegeek.com