Correção de frases "In conclusion I would like taking..."

Olá. As seguintes frases estão corretas gramaticalmente?

Se alguém tiver alguma sugestão de modificar palavras para que fique mais parecido com um inglês nativo será otimo....

In conclusion I would like taking responsibility and working as part of an exceptional team. I am eager to gain new experiences and the program is the best way to achieve that.

Moreover, the presence of a brazilian student in the Programm will encourage another South American students to participating in the next years.


I will not want to stop from what I achieved, but to continue my postgraduate studies.


The international aspect, top standard of education that comes across students from many countries and the cooperated studies is very enriching and exactly what I am looking for. I am highly motivated to participate of the program.

Thank you.
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49120 21 73 1139
Daniel,

Sugestões de melhoria:

In conclusion, I would like to take on some responsibility and work as a part of an exceptional team. I am eager to gain new experiences and the program is the best way to achieve that.

Moreover, the presence of a Brazilian student in the Program will encourage other South American students to participate in the next years.

I will not want to stop what I achieved and I'll continue my postgraduate studies.


Bem-vindo ao fórum!
Olá Donai, obrigado pelas correções...

Encontrei as duas formas na internet, porém gostaria de saber qual é mais correta/formal:

I never had occasion to travel to Brazil.
I had never occasion to travel to Brazil.

Já ouvi a primeira, está correta?
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49120 21 73 1139
Daniel,

Este assunto já foi discutido aqui, veja o link a seguir:

have occasion x find occasion
Avatar do usuário Flavia.lm 3885 1 9 86
Se a dúvida for somente sobre a posição do never, eu recomendo:

I've never had occasion to travel to Brazil.