Olá. As seguintes frases estão corretas gramaticalmente?
Se alguém tiver alguma sugestão de modificar palavras para que fique mais parecido com um inglês nativo será otimo....
In conclusion I would like taking responsibility and working as part of an exceptional team. I am eager to gain new experiences and the program is the best way to achieve that.
Moreover, the presence of a brazilian student in the Programm will encourage another South American students to participating in the next years.
I will not want to stop from what I achieved, but to continue my postgraduate studies.
The international aspect, top standard of education that comes across students from many countries and the cooperated studies is very enriching and exactly what I am looking for. I am highly motivated to participate of the program.