Correção de mensagem em inglês
My girlfriend and I are studyng together. And for practice we are just talking in english.
And follows one message that I sent do her:
You think exactly the way I do. I really don't think that I would thought like you did about the example I used in the morning. That I said about the fever. So I put this beside and focus on my study again. Because I know that someday I'll think correct and natural. And something else, I bet with you that inside this whole message contain at least one mistake. Of grammar, vocabulary, or anything.
and what a really want to say:
Você pensa exatamente do mesmo jeito que eu. E eu acho que eu não pensaria do jeito que você pensou hoje de manhã, quando usei o exemplo da febre. Então coloquei isso de lado e foquei em meus estudos. Porque eu sei que um dia eu vou pensar correto e natural. E mais uma coisa, eu aposto com você que dentro desta mensagem inteira há pelo menos um erro. De gramática, vocabulário, ou qualquer coisa.
How many mistakes I did? I'm using too much with and that?
thks
And follows one message that I sent do her:
You think exactly the way I do. I really don't think that I would thought like you did about the example I used in the morning. That I said about the fever. So I put this beside and focus on my study again. Because I know that someday I'll think correct and natural. And something else, I bet with you that inside this whole message contain at least one mistake. Of grammar, vocabulary, or anything.
and what a really want to say:
Você pensa exatamente do mesmo jeito que eu. E eu acho que eu não pensaria do jeito que você pensou hoje de manhã, quando usei o exemplo da febre. Então coloquei isso de lado e foquei em meus estudos. Porque eu sei que um dia eu vou pensar correto e natural. E mais uma coisa, eu aposto com você que dentro desta mensagem inteira há pelo menos um erro. De gramática, vocabulário, ou qualquer coisa.
How many mistakes I did? I'm using too much with and that?
thks
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Sugestões de correção:
You think exactly the way I do. I really don't think I would agree with you about the example I used in the morning about the fever. So I put this beside and decided to focus on my studies again. Because I know that someday I'll think correctly and naturally. And something else, I bet you that inside this whole message there is at least one mistake: grammar, vocabulary, or whatever.
You think exactly the way I do. I really don't think I would agree with you about the example I used in the morning about the fever. So I put this beside and decided to focus on my studies again. Because I know that someday I'll think correctly and naturally. And something else, I bet you that inside this whole message there is at least one mistake: grammar, vocabulary, or whatever.