Correção de mensagem para 'host family' em inglês
- larissarodrigues
- Membro desde: 19 Mai 2012, 17:30
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Gente, vou fazer um intercâmbio e preciso responder um e-mail a minha host family, mas estou morrendo de medo de ter algum erro ridículo !
Quem puder dar uma lida e comentar, agradeço muito !!!
Dear Mr and Mrs Baker,
Let me tell you a bit about myself.
My name ( ), I am ( ) years old. I live in Sao Paulo, Brazil, with my parents and sisters, I am the oldest one.
I really thank you for receiving me into your house. This exchange program is something that I've always wanted and I am very happy and excited for traveling to Oxford.
Well, I do not have my flight times yet. As soon as I get it, I will send to you.
Just for curiosity, is attached a recente photo of my family.
Yours faithfully.
Quem puder dar uma lida e comentar, agradeço muito !!!
Dear Mr and Mrs Baker,
Let me tell you a bit about myself.
My name ( ), I am ( ) years old. I live in Sao Paulo, Brazil, with my parents and sisters, I am the oldest one.
I really thank you for receiving me into your house. This exchange program is something that I've always wanted and I am very happy and excited for traveling to Oxford.
Well, I do not have my flight times yet. As soon as I get it, I will send to you.
Just for curiosity, is attached a recente photo of my family.
Yours faithfully.
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- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
- Localização: Morrinhos - Goiás
- Membro desde: 15 Abr 2008, 00:47
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Let me tell you a bit about myself.
My name ( ), I am ( ) years old. I live in Sao Paulo, Brazil, with my parents and sisters. I am the oldest one.
I really want to thank you for having me at your house. This exchange program is something that I've always wanted and I am very happy and excited for traveling to Oxford.
Well, I do not have my flight times yet. As soon as I get them, I will send them to you.
- Follow attached a recent photo of my family.
Let me tell you a bit about myself.
My name ( ), I am ( ) years old. I live in Sao Paulo, Brazil, with my parents and sisters. I am the oldest one.
I really want to thank you for having me at your house. This exchange program is something that I've always wanted and I am very happy and excited for traveling to Oxford.
Well, I do not have my flight times yet. As soon as I get them, I will send them to you.
- Follow attached a recent photo of my family.
- Eric-The-Dane
- Membro desde: 10 Mar 2012, 12:40
- Perfil · 10 Mensagens
Eu sugiro:
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Baker,
Thank you very much for allowing me to stay in your home. I really look foward to meeting you.
I always wanted to participate in this exchange programme. I am very happy and excited about travelling to Oxford. I, too, would love to see neighbouring Abingdon.
My name is ( ) and I am ( ) years old. I live with my parents and sisters in Sao Paulo, Brazil. My flights times have not been confirmed yet, but as soon as I receive the final details, I will inform you.
I attach a recent photograph of my family for you to see.
Yours sincerely,
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Baker,
Thank you very much for allowing me to stay in your home. I really look foward to meeting you.
I always wanted to participate in this exchange programme. I am very happy and excited about travelling to Oxford. I, too, would love to see neighbouring Abingdon.
My name is ( ) and I am ( ) years old. I live with my parents and sisters in Sao Paulo, Brazil. My flights times have not been confirmed yet, but as soon as I receive the final details, I will inform you.
I attach a recent photograph of my family for you to see.
Yours sincerely,