Eu escrevi o seguinte texto: "I live in a city called Belo Horizonte, which is located in the southeastern Brazil. Belo Horizonte is a metropolis because of its importance to the Brazilian economy and the number of inhabitants, which is around 2.5 million people. I have moved downtown to make it easier to get to work and college. However, when it is necessary to go to another place I take the subway or the bus. The subway is very much important in a big city with a complicated transit, mainly in the "rush time"; although, is not as efficient, extensive or vast as it should be or as it is in other cities like London and New York."
Gostaria de algum suporte ou sugestão quanto à pontuação e palavras usadas. Obrigado!