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Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When a people resolve to enter in a university, he/she wants specialize in something that he/she liked for to be prepared to the future working in choose area. Depended what university and course the people choose, he/she will need study many subjects for different areas or a specifics subject for the course.
In my point of view, study many subjects are essential nowadays because, with the globalized world, is necessary to know little about a lot of subjects. For example, a forester is specialized in products and management of forests. He needed study about things connected to forest, as biology. But if he haven’t a idea for how the economic market work, probably his business will be worst than other forester that know about economy.
However, a professional that studied many areas of knowledge won’t need help for resolve some simple problems. So it is interesting to do a search before enter in a university to know how it teach.
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When someone decides to get into university, they want to specialize in something that they would like to be prepared for in the future job in the choosen area. Depending on what university and course they choose, they will need to study many subjects for different areas or a specific subject for the course.
In my point of view, studying many subjects is essential nowadays because, with the globalized world, it is necessary to know little about a lot of subjects. For example, a forester is specialized in products and management of forests. He needed to study things connected to forests, such as biology. But if he doesn't have an idea of how the economic market works, probably his business will be worse than those of other foresters that know about economy.
However, a professional that studied many areas of knowledge won’t need help to resolve some simple problems. So it is interesting to do some research before entering a university in order to obtain useful information.