Correção de texto: 3nd TOEFL Test - Eco certify batch

The passage and the lecture expose the problem about the ecological sustainable forestry practices in wood companies around the USA. Despite many companies adopted the new way to work and the certification granted the USA will not allow this initiative so easily for three reasons.
First of all, the advertising of a certification don’t take attention for the commons consumers who wasn’t believe on this type of propaganda, besides the lecture expose about some consumers who will pay for a different kind of certification, one trustfully for be paid it.
Thinking in the price the second reason is the high price the certificated products would be practice. The American consumer are attract for low prices rather than eco certification product. The lecture contradicts this affirmative exposing the consumers who will pay for some product with quality and don’t care about pay something more expensive, like 5% higher rather then pay for something with a unknown product.
The third and final reason is the international market of wood are not the focus of the American company’s then the certify isn’t so necessary to sell the product on the country, but the lecture call the attention to the potential of the international companies and their certification around the word. This potential can turn a difference on the market and dominate all the consumers in American.

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The passage and the lecture expose the problem about the ecological sustainable

- First of all, you do mean "lecture"? the instructional talk given on a particular subject or a scolding given after one having just made something wrong?
-Chances are that you mean "reading" or "(piece of) text?"

forestry practices in wood companies around the USA. Despite many companies HAVING adopted the new way to work and the certification granted BY the USA government etc WON´T be granted so easily. For the three following reasons:
Firstly, the advertising of a certification doesn’t take into account the common consumers who DON´T believe on this type of propaganda. Besides, the lecture (WORK?) discuss the consumer who will pay for a different kind of certification, one THAT he trustfully paid for it.


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