Correção de texto: a bat in the show

Avatar do usuário Andrezzatkm 4810 1 8 105
After a tour on EUA, The british singer Adele lived a unusual situation during hers performance at the Mexico City, on last Tuesday. A bat came flaying over the audience and made the artist have a funny reaction, besides interrupt the show.
Adele began to shake her arms, and crying "a bat, a bat". She jumped, and pointed to someone in the audience that there was a bat over their head.

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After a tour on EUA, The british singer Adele lived a unusual situation during hers performance at the Mexico City, on last Tuesday. A bat came flaying over the audience and made the artist have a funny reaction, besides interrupt the show.
Adele began to shake her arms, and crying "a bat, a bat". She jumped, and pointed to someone in the audience that there was a bat over their head.

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After a tour in the USA, the British singer Adele lived a unusual situation during her performance in Mexico City, last Tuesday. A bat came flying over the audience and made the artist have a funny reaction, besides interrupting the show.
Adele began to shake her arms, and crying "a bat, a bat". She jumped, and pointed to someone in the audience that there was a bat over their head.

É interessante (apesar de negro) que a palavra flay significa esfolar.
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Avatar do usuário PPAULO 41455 6 32 727
The "British singer", since national adjectives are capitalized.