Correção de texto: A box of chocolates

Last night, I ate a box of chocolates that was in the kitchen. I didn't know that my mother had bought it to a party.
She had planed (to Plan) To give the chocolates as a gift to the hostess.
So I had to replace the box of chocolates before my mom got home, but all the stores had already closed.
Then, I remembered that I had gave my girlfriend the same box of chocolates for her birthday the week before.
I realized that she had probably ate all the chocolates by now, but there was no harm in asking.

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4 respostas
Redseahorse 2 28 380
algumas sugestões:

Last night, I ate a box of chocolates that was in the kitchen. I didn't know that my mother had bought it to a party.
She had PLANNED To give the chocolates as a gift to the GUESTS, so I had to replace THEM before my mom got home, but all the stores had already closed.
Then, I remembered that I had gave my girlfriend the same box of chocolates for her birthday the week before.
I realized that she had probably ate all the chocolates by now, but there was no harm in asking.
gian2hard 1 7 51
adding on..

* I had given
* She had probably eaten
I didn't know that my mother had bought it to a party.

It should be FOR I didn't know that my mother had bought it for a party.

Get and synonyms (buy, purchase, obtain) use for
give and synonyms (donate, offer, provide) use to.

before my mom got home ... I believe that this part of the sentence should be rewrote in the present tense: before my mom GETS
Juliana Rios 24 105 394
"So I had to replace the box of chocolates before my mom got home".

This is an account of a past event, so "got" is correct.