Correção de texto: A place I pass by every day

A place I pass by every day

A few weeks ago, I got very sick and I decided don't go to the work. At night, It was shown in the news that a guy have died in a car accident. I was shocked when I realize it happened in a place I pass by every day at the same time I usually go to work. I was very grateful for my sickness.

APRESENTAÇÃO PESSOAL EM INGLÊS
Nesta aula, a professora Camila Oliveira ensina como você deve se preparar para fazer uma apresentação pessoal profissional em inglês. O conteúdo dessa aula ajudará você a aproveitar melhor as oportunidades no ambiente corporativo. ACESSAR AULA
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A few weeks ago, I was very sick and I decided not to go to work. At night, I saw on the news that a guy had died in a car accident. I was shocked when I realized it had happened in a place I pass by every day, and at the same time I usually go to work. So, I was really happy that I was sick.
ENTENDENDO AS HORAS EM INGLÊS
Nesta aula, a professora Camila Oliveira ensina vários macetes para você nunca mais se confundir na hora de dizer as horas em inglês. ACESSAR AULA
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