Correção de texto: a woman in a car
- Andrezzatkm
- Localização: Recife, Brazil
- Membro desde: 15 Jun 2013, 22:59
- Perfil · 4.9k Pontos · 1k Mensagens
Police in a town of Canada received a call reporting a old woman alone in a car that was parked in a frozen wheather. People were concerned that the woman could die from so low temperature. When the police officers get into the place, they saw a “woman” with the seat belt on and wearing a respiration mask, so they broke the window of the car to save the "victim". However, they found out that there were no victim at all. In the car there where a life-like doll. When the car owner came into the place, he explained that he is a sales maneger in a company that manufactures products for medical training, and the given doll was one of the products they sell, used for CPR training. The police stated that they were no regretted to breack the window’s car. If any citizen leave a life-like doll wearing a seat-belt in their car we will breake you Window’s car. The police said.
AMPLIANDO O VOCABULÁRIO
1 resposta
Resposta mais votada
- Carls
- Localização: Benguela - Angola
- Membro desde: 15 Jul 2011, 15:11
- Perfil · 3.3k Pontos · 988 Mensagens
Sugestão:
Em vez de:
Police in a town of Canada received a call reporting a old woman alone in a car that was parked in a frozen wheather. People were concerned that the woman could die from so low temperature. When the police officers get into the place, they saw a “woman” with the seat belt on and wearing a respiration mask, so they broke the window of the car to save the "victim". However, they found out that there were no victim at all. In the car there where a life-like doll. When the car owner came into the place, he explained that he is a sales maneger in a company that manufactures products for medical training, and the given doll was one of the products they sell, used for CPR training. The police stated that they were no regretted to breack the window’s car. If any citizen leave a life-like doll wearing a seat-belt in their car we will breake you Window’s car. The police said.
Sugiro:
Police in a town of Canada received a call reporting an old woman alone in a car that was parked in a frozen weather. People were concerned that the woman could die from so low temperature. When the police officers got into the place, they saw a “woman” with the seat belt on and wearing a respiration mask, so they broke the window of the car to save the "victim". However, they found out that there were no victims (OU there was no victim) at all. In the car there was a life-like doll. When the car owner came into the place, he explained that he is a sales manager in a company that manufactures products for medical training, and the given doll was one of the products they sell, used for CPR training. The police stated that they didn’t regret to break (OU they were not sorry for breaking) the car window (OU car’s window). If any citizen leaves a life-like doll wearing a seat-belt in his car, we will break his car window (OU car’s window). The police said.
Em vez de:
Police in a town of Canada received a call reporting a old woman alone in a car that was parked in a frozen wheather. People were concerned that the woman could die from so low temperature. When the police officers get into the place, they saw a “woman” with the seat belt on and wearing a respiration mask, so they broke the window of the car to save the "victim". However, they found out that there were no victim at all. In the car there where a life-like doll. When the car owner came into the place, he explained that he is a sales maneger in a company that manufactures products for medical training, and the given doll was one of the products they sell, used for CPR training. The police stated that they were no regretted to breack the window’s car. If any citizen leave a life-like doll wearing a seat-belt in their car we will breake you Window’s car. The police said.
Sugiro:
Police in a town of Canada received a call reporting an old woman alone in a car that was parked in a frozen weather. People were concerned that the woman could die from so low temperature. When the police officers got into the place, they saw a “woman” with the seat belt on and wearing a respiration mask, so they broke the window of the car to save the "victim". However, they found out that there were no victims (OU there was no victim) at all. In the car there was a life-like doll. When the car owner came into the place, he explained that he is a sales manager in a company that manufactures products for medical training, and the given doll was one of the products they sell, used for CPR training. The police stated that they didn’t regret to break (OU they were not sorry for breaking) the car window (OU car’s window). If any citizen leaves a life-like doll wearing a seat-belt in his car, we will break his car window (OU car’s window). The police said.