Correção de texto: about depression

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If a friend of yours, a relative or your partner is suffering with depression, you can feel confuse and frustrated with the way to deal with that person. Occasionally, you can also feel affected when you realize you supports isn’t helping. You start to feel afraid to get things worse. There is a huge probability for you to feel lost, without know what you need to do.
Be informed about that disorder. It is very important to know and seek as much information as possible to understand the person who suffer with depression. This understanding is vital if you want to offer any sort of help. Depression is a serious issue.
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I'd write this text just as the one below. Don't consider it as perfect, because I'm a learner as well, haha.
"If whether a friend, relative or partner of yours is suffering due to depression, you might feel confused and be frustrated by the way you should deal with that person. Occasionally, you can also feel affected when you realize your efforts aren't helping him/her. You start to get afraid the things get worse. It's very likely you to feel lost, with no answers about what you need to do for it.
Be aware of that. It's very important that you know and look for as much information as possible to comprehend the situation which the person who suffers from depression undergoes. This comprehension is crucial if you desire to help this one. Depression is a serious problem."
Hi Andrezza,

Looks good! My suggestions in bold:

If a friend of yours, a relative or your partner is suffering with depression, you can feel confused and frustrated with the way to deal with that person. Occasionally, you can also feel affected when you realize you supports isn’t helping. You start to feel afraid to get things worse. There is a huge probability for you to feel lost, without knowing what you need to do.

Be informed about that disorder. It is very important to know and seek as much information as possible to understand the person who suffers with depression. This understanding is vital if you want to offer any sort of help. Depression is a serious issue.


HTH