Correção de texto "About my rental skills I get some..."

Good morning
About my rental skills I get some in my mother’s company in Brazil (Art store) which I was involved before I go to the college.
But my real experience is in hotels where I learned how to deal with the guests and with employees.
My last salary was 2.700,00 Singapore dollars, and I´m open to negotiate.

Following I attached send my CV

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Donay Mendonça 22 102 1.5k
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Good morning
About my rental skills, I got some in my mother’s company in Brazil (Art store) which I was involved with before I went to college.
But my real experience is with hotels where I learned how to deal with guests and employees.
My previous salary was about 2.700,00 Singapore dollars, and I´m open to negotiations.

Please find attached my CV


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