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About my rental skills, I got some in my mother’s company in Brazil (Art store) which I was involved with before I went to college.
But my real experience is with hotels where I learned how to deal with guests and employees.
My previous salary was about 2.700,00 Singapore dollars, and I´m open to negotiations.
Please find attached my CV
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