Correção de texto: blackout

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The heavy storm that hit the city of Sorocaba, during the afternoon and night of last wendnesday affected the power supply for almost 100 thousand residents. The main problems thas led to the blackout were, tre falling over the powerlines and damages caused by the force of the wind. Almost 24 hour later, many residentes in the district are still out of power supply. A resident on a neighborhood affected said she is out of electric power since 17h30 of wendnesday.
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The heavy storm that hit Sorocaba city, during Wednesday afternoon and well into the night caused power supply outages/blackouts to almost 100 thousand residents.
The blackout, was caused by trees that has fallen over power lines along with damages to the electric transmission lines, substations and the electrical infrastructure system by the force of the wind (or causes related to it).
Almost 24 hour later, many residents in the district are still without eletricity. One/a resident living in an affected neighborhood said that her is without eletricity since 5:30 pm of Wednesday.


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Andrezza, I have noticed that you didn´t use a capital letter with days of the week (in the current case, Wednesday) and that has happened before (in other pieces of text.) Just a head up, I know that you master this grammar point, only has skipped it, in haste.