Correção de texto "But, being realistic, one of the main..."

Oi, queria saber se posso usar assim:

"But, being realistic, one of the main objectives of politics is not to extend its influential power enabling the cliques moving forward to get more resources of power?"

Ou se seria "But, being realistic, is not one of the main objectives of politics to extend its influential power enabling the cliques moving forward to get more resources of power?

A sentença completa é:
You said that the central government has been appropriated many dimensions of the political activities in the local government. But, being realistic, one of the main objectives of politics is not to extend its influential power enabling the cliques moving forward to get more resources of power?

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Mayaya,

In American English one way to write your post to make sense is as follows:

"You said that the central government has been appropriating many prerogatives of the the local government. But, being realistic, is not one of the main objectives of politics to extend a group's influence and power, which enables the ruling cliques to gain even more power."

I hope this helps you.
Hi, w.salyman,

Thanks for your time. Very helpful indeed!

Cheers!