Correção de texto: Carta para uma banda

Eu não sou tão boa, e preciso de ajuda pra ver se não errei em nadinha nesse pequeno texto que eu gostaria de enviar para o email de uma banda.

"I may be being annoying. Sorry, this is not the real intention.
And sorry too for my bad english... Hahaha. I'm brazilian, and fan since 2004. Almost 10 years... That's a long time, right? I never went to a show, and the last show - in Brazil - before you apart the band was the I most wanted to go. I remember the date... 22 oct 2009, with 50c and Blink 182. :3 I'll never forget. So, I hope to you back to Brazil and and I can go this time!

And I hope you read it too.
"

Obrigada! \o/
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I think it might be annoying but this is not my real intention.
And I'm sorry for my bad English. I'm Brazilian, and a big fan since 2004. It's been almost 10 years. That's a long time, isn't it? I've never been to a show, and the last one - in Brazil - before the band broke up, was one I really wanted to go to. I remember the date... 22 oct 2009, with 50c and Blink 182. :3 I'll never forget. So, I hope you come back to Brazil and I can go this time!