Correção de texto: Cartão de aniversário
- Nanda Sousa
- Membro desde: 27 Mar 2014, 00:55
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Eu e minha família estamos organizando um cartão para enviarmos a minha afilhada e gostaria de ajuda para saber se o texto está coerente, se está muito repetitivo ou se posso subsituir expressões por outras. No final, queria chamá-la de 'bochechuda' que é o apelido na família, mas não sei o correpondente em inglês e fiquei em dúvida se 'chubby' pode ser considerado ofensivo. O cartão é:
Hello Sarah,
I hope you have a great birthday, many happy returns and all the happiness in the world. I wish you the best of luck and every success in your career.
I really don't know how to thank you for all the love and respect that you have for all of us. Feel so proud to be your godmother and I wanna thank you for being an amazing person.
I hope today and all your days be jolly.
P.S.: You are the most beautiful chubby in the world.
Hello Sarah,
I hope you have a great birthday, many happy returns and all the happiness in the world. I wish you the best of luck and every success in your career.
I really don't know how to thank you for all the love and respect that you have for all of us. Feel so proud to be your godmother and I wanna thank you for being an amazing person.
I hope today and all your days be jolly.
P.S.: You are the most beautiful chubby in the world.
MELHORE SUA PRONÚNCIA EM INGLÊS
1 resposta
- PPAULO
- Localização: Rio de Janeiro-Brazil
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Here my comment on that...
You´re are the ever the loveliest chubby girl in the world.
You´re are the most beautiful chubby in the world. (perhaps "the little chubby girl in the world.") at least if she is this age. >>>
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http://legacy-cdn.smosh.com/smosh-pit/0 ... girl-2.jpg
http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_kpowg ... o1_500.jpg
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As for she taking offense or not, I don´t know; but if you think she may or may not take offense, perhaps is not the best time to risk knowing it firsthand.
And maybe you can "weaken'' the statement by saying it´s just a nick, in this way:
You are the most beautiful "chubby" in the world.
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Well, now I leave to more advanced learners.
It´s worth noticing that sometimes it´s interchangeable the meaning of chubby as chubby-cheeked (a chubby-cheeked baby, for instance.) or chubby in general (a chubby baby, with chubby legs, arms, cheeks etc).
You´re are the ever the loveliest chubby girl in the world.
You´re are the most beautiful chubby in the world. (perhaps "the little chubby girl in the world.") at least if she is this age. >>>
http://dailypicksandflicks.com/wp-conte ... -meme-.jpg
http://legacy-cdn.smosh.com/smosh-pit/0 ... girl-2.jpg
http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_kpowg ... o1_500.jpg
http://i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/new ... 72/d56.jpg
http://i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/new ... 274730.jpg
http://shivisays.files.wordpress.com/20 ... .jpg?w=640
http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/ori ... 38/465.png
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As for she taking offense or not, I don´t know; but if you think she may or may not take offense, perhaps is not the best time to risk knowing it firsthand.
And maybe you can "weaken'' the statement by saying it´s just a nick, in this way:
You are the most beautiful "chubby" in the world.
================================
Well, now I leave to more advanced learners.
It´s worth noticing that sometimes it´s interchangeable the meaning of chubby as chubby-cheeked (a chubby-cheeked baby, for instance.) or chubby in general (a chubby baby, with chubby legs, arms, cheeks etc).