Correção de texto: Crowded bus

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Mark is a proof that when you love you are capable of anyting. In their case, until walking in a crowded bus througout the city to acompaigh his beloved. Mary refusea ride in his car, but he don't desist and decided to face the bus trip alongside her.
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Texto original:

Mark is a proof that when you love you are capable of anyting. In their case, until walking in a crowded bus througout the city to acompaigh his beloved. Mary refusea ride in his car, but he don't desist and decided to face the bus trip alongside her.

Texto corrigido:

Mark is a proof that when you love you are capable of anything. In their case, even walking in a crowded bus throughout the city to acccompany his beloved. Mary refused a ride in his car, but he didn't give up and decided to face the bus trip alongside her.

OBS: "capable of anything" é bem informal e eu não aconselho o seu uso.

Espero que tenha ajudado!