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Hey guys. So, I wrote a text for a presentation. Can you help me? Is it good? I need of opinions.
Death of a young black in Baltimore
Racism is a way of discriminating someone by color or characteristics such that the person exalt itself. Today despite all history facts, the racism is something very present and a important thing is that some people neither respect themselves or others. In Brazil there is an interesting affirmation that says: “The person facing national ethics”. There is a research about skin color where the majority of the blacks themselves don’t admit that they are black and call themselves “pardos”. They end up being racists to themselves, but what made talk about this was an interesting thing that happened in the United States.
Same with a black president in the United States (what cause a lot of impacts in society) there are much to be confronted.
The boy Freddie Grey died in a hospital on April 19th. The youngster had been approached by six white police officers on April 12th and suffered a broken vertebra during the detention. The police accused of Grey of carrying a pocketknife, but it’s something that is allowed in United States. By de newspaper (Through newspaper reports?) , the young also (hated the larynx??) that provoked much protests and a investigation.
This is a recent fact that there are increasing occurrences in the United States of Afro-Americans being killed by white police officers abusing their power.
It happens that a lot of deaths of unarmed blacks in a lot of white police officers operations are provoking some wave of protests in the country.
There are important cases like: Michel Brown, 18 years old, Eric Garner, 43 years old, and a little boy of 12 years old.