Correção de texto Devil Ninja 2

Eu escrevi esse mini texto três vezes,uma vez no tempo passado,uma vez no tempo futuro e outra vez no tempo presente.Queria ver se errei nos tempos Going To,Will,Present Perfect,Simple Past.E se errei,aonde e por que,se alguém souber explicar.

Passado: Devil Ninja two was a touchscreen game for Android. You've played a demons killer ninja. The game was easy to play, one touch to jump and another to attack, the ninja had walked alone. And, many demons was coming and you should kill or avoid them, there was a boss too, a big demon. There was no end in this game.

Presente: Devil Ninja two is a touchscreen game for Android. You play a demons killer ninja. The game is easy to play, one touch to jump and another to attack, the ninja walks alone. And, many demons are coming and you should kill or avoid them, there's a boss too, a big demon. There's no end in this game.

Futuro: Devil Ninja two is going to be a touchscreen game for Android. You're going to play a demons killer ninja. The game is going to be easy to play, one touch to jump and another to attack, the ninja is going to walk alone. And, many demons are going to come and you should kill or avoid them, there will be a boss too, a big demon. There will be no end in this game.

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Donay Mendonça 22 102 1.5k
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Passado: Devil Ninja two was a touchscreen game for Android. You played a demons killer ninja. The game was easy to play, one touch to jump and another to attack, the ninja walked alone. And, many demons were coming and you should have killed or avoided them, there was a boss too, a big demon. There was no end in this game.

Presente: Devil Ninja two is a touchscreen game for Android. You play a demons killer ninja. The game is easy to play, one touch to jump and another to attack, the ninja walks alone. And, many demons are coming and you should kill or avoid them, there's a boss too, a big demon. There's no end in this game.

Futuro: Devil Ninja two is going to be a touchscreen game for Android. You're going to play a demons killer ninja. The game is going to be easy to play, one touch to jump and another to attack, the ninja is going to walk alone. And, many demons are going to come and you should kill or avoid them, there will be a boss too, a big demon. There will be no end in this game.
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