Condorito (in E
e Condor) is a character of a very popular C
comic which is a succ
ess in many L
. "Condorito" is a daring character and many times he mess up when do or say something. Almost always he
what he wants
. But he is don´t mean he does it in a bad way or that he is bad at all, it is acctually a nai
ve bird that try to do things
in the best way. The plot
other characters, each one with a different personal
ity. The end result of it are very funny estories for the public.
Notice: it´s a rough draft, others may refine it further.
Your piece was creative and the subject relevant, it had just some grammar slips or some parts in need of some polishing, but all in all, it was good.
Perhaps "nayve" (with "y" instead of the letter "i") shows some Spanish of yours, that is, you being from Chile or some other Latin American country, or that you are of some Chilean descent (parents being Chilean, I mean). It´s just a passing comment, nothing wrong with it, it´s because we get used to the drawbacks of our people in English. That is, we from Romance languages have the same or similar problems with English at the beggining.
I am no exception.
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