Correção de texto: "Don't be afraid to say you're sorry"

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Dont be afraid to say you're sorry

When i was 6 years old i saw him; his name was Chris and he was 12. All the girls in that neighbourhood were head over heels in love with him so for a while I thought there was no hope for me... but i was so wrong. The day i realised he felt the same about me was also the day i lost him. I listened to a "friend" of mine, which was a mistake, and he got mad at me; still he came back but none of us was able to say anything, we just stood there looking at eachother. It broke my heart that i didnt tell him what i had to say: that i was sorry and that i was in love with him. i saw him again the following years but i was in a car or something else with other people and he was walking down the street so i couldnt talk to him. I find it hard to believe that i lived all these years without him and i wish that i could meet him again and get to know him. What if it is too late?

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Donay Mendonça 22 102 1.5k
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Dont be afraid to say you're sorry.

When I was 6 years old I saw him; his name was Chris and he was 12. All the girls in that neighbourhood were head over heels in love with him, so for a while I thought there was no hope for me. But I was wrong. The day I realised he felt the same about me was also the day I lost him. I listened to a "friend" of mine, which was a mistake, and he got mad at me; still he came back but none of us was able to say anything, we just stood there looking at each other. It broke my heart that I didn't tell him what I had to say: that I was sorry and that I was in love with him. I saw him again the following years but I was in a car or something else with other people and he was walking down the street, so I couldn't talk to him. I find it hard to believe that I lived all these years without him and I wish that I could meet him again and get to know him. What if it is too late?
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