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Currently, I'm studying at University of ABC. I want to get a bachelor's degree in E
ngineering, but, in order to get it
, I need, beforehand, to have/hold a degree
in Science and Technology.The duration
of the bachelor in Science and Technology course is three years and, during this time, you will study P
hemistry, all the subjects needed to continue Engineering studies
After this time, you will actually be able to start the E
ourse. I chose E
ngineering because I think that we will need to have knowledge *in the future on
how to generate energy without polluting the environment, such as, using renewable types
of energy (wind, solar and biomass) instead of non-renewable energy, like petrol **.
future, my plan is to get/achieve a M
egree in E
Well, about my university, in general we do not have big problems. The campus is stil under construction
, so we have
problems with parking space, but, in my opinion, it is not a big deal. The biggest problem that I see
is the security around the campus and, sometimes, thefts inside the university.
In short, I like to study here. I suppose
that I am having a
great education and the
all my plans for the
*This knowledge is needed today.
**Energy is not just about environmental energy. Read the following articles:http://www.nano.org.uk/what-is-nanotechnologyhttp://www.pitt.edu/~super4/36011-37001/36421.ppthttp://www.bbc.com/future/story/2014032 ... -wormholes