Correção de texto em inglês: Ecology

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Ecology

A subject that have been on top in this last years is ecology. People are always saying that we have change our habits in order to avoid destroy the environment. I think the environment is something perfect and it can't be destroyed by us. It is always balanced. Species are missing since before the humans arise. In my opinion, the problem is that when the humans start to interfere so much in the environment balance, the environment has to kill the humans in order to keep balanced.
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A subject that has been a hot topic in this last few years is ecology. People are always saying that we have to change our habits in order to avoid the destruction of the environment. I think the environment is something perfect and it can't be destroyed by us. It is always balanced. Species have been missing since before the humans arose. In my opinion, the problem is that once the humans start interfering so much in the environment , the environment has to kill the humans in order to keep balance.
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A subject that has been in the spotlight over the past few years is ecology. People are always saying that we have to change our habits in order to avoid destroying the environment. I think the environment is something perfect and it can't be destroyed by us. It is always balanced. Species have been missing since before humans. In my opinion, the problem is that when humans start to interfere so much in the environment balance, the environment has to kill humans in order to keep itself balanced.
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