Correção de texto em inglês: Everyone else was laughing

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Everyone else was laughing

Sometimes we find ourselves in embarassing situations. When I was a child it was more frequently. I remember, for example, the day when I wanted to go to the bathroom at school, but I was afraid to ask to the teacher. Suddenly, I couldn't take it anymore and started to pee my pants. Everyone else was laughing. For my luck, the bell rang and everyone left, except the teacher who help me in my situation.

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Sometimes we find ourselves in embarassing situations. When I was a child it was more frequent. I remember, for example, the day when I wanted to go to the restroom at school, but I was afraid to ask the teacher. Suddenly, I couldn't take it anymore and started to pee in my pants. Everyone else was laughing. For my luck, the bell rang and everyone left, except for the teacher who helped me in the situation.
Avatar do usuário draylson 15
Thanks.