Correção de texto em inglês: River Pollution

draylson 15
River Pollution

It's look like a dream when we heard about swimming on a river or drinking the water of a river. Nowadays, almost rivers that we know are completely polluted by the trash and sewer thrown into them. However, in my opinion, the big problem is the chemical pollution. Industries throw tonnes of chemicals directly into the rivers without a previous filtering process.
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Donay Mendonça 58560 21 97 1411
Sugestoes de correção:
It seems like a dream when we hear about swimming in a river or drinking the water of a river. Nowadays, almost all the rivers that we know are completely polluted by the trash and sewage thrown into them. However, in my opinion, the big problem is the chemical pollution. Industries throw tons of chemicals directly into the rivers without a previous filtering process.

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draylson 15
Thanks.

Flavia.lm 3975 1 9 91
Que tal "the biggest problem", já que são diversos problemas?

shark 20
Pow, minha sugestão ficaria a mesma do donay, exceto pelo trecho

"...almost rivers that we know are completely polluted by the trash and sewer..."

que eu sugeriria

"...almost all rivers that we know have been completely polluted by the trash and sewer..."