Correção de texto em inglês: River Pollution

Avatar do usuário draylson 15
River Pollution

It's look like a dream when we heard about swimming on a river or drinking the water of a river. Nowadays, almost rivers that we know are completely polluted by the trash and sewer thrown into them. However, in my opinion, the big problem is the chemical pollution. Industries throw tonnes of chemicals directly into the rivers without a previous filtering process.
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49025 21 73 1137
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It seems like a dream when we hear about swimming in a river or drinking the water of a river. Nowadays, almost all the rivers that we know are completely polluted by the trash and sewage thrown into them. However, in my opinion, the big problem is the chemical pollution. Industries throw tons of chemicals directly into the rivers without a previous filtering process.



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Avatar do usuário draylson 15
Thanks.
Avatar do usuário Flavia.lm 3885 1 9 86
Que tal "the biggest problem", já que são diversos problemas?
Pow, minha sugestão ficaria a mesma do donay, exceto pelo trecho

"...almost rivers that we know are completely polluted by the trash and sewer..."

que eu sugeriria

"...almost all rivers that we know have been completely polluted by the trash and sewer..."