Correção de texto em inglês sobre depressão

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Depression is a serious problem that impacts very aspects of teen’s life
Depression can lead to problems at school, at home, drugs, self-cutting.
And tragedy suck as homicidal violence or suicide
Depression can destroy the teenager’s personality
But it is the theory of depression…
I can say what lived, I had that problem. But it is more that a problem, it is a sickness. And there is treatment.
I was depressed for 3 years, at first moment my mother led me to a psychology...

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Algumas sugestões de correção dentro do que o contexto permite entender:

Depression is a serious problem that affects many aspects of a teenager's life.
Depression can lead to problems with school, at home, with drugs, self-cutting.
And tragedies such as homicidal violence or suicide.
Depression can destroy a teenager’s personality.
But it is the theory of depression.
I can say that from what I lived. I had that problem. But it is more than a problem, it is an illness. And there is treatment.
I was depressed for 3 years; at the first moment my mother took me to a psychologist.