Correção de texto em inglês: The Movie Theater

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The Movie Theater

Nowadays, It's very difficult someone goes to the movie theater. The reason for this is the rise of the television devices and the sound systems devices. It's like you have your own movie theater inside your home. In my opinion, the another reason is the internet. Illegally downloading movies for free from the internet is a practice ever more frequently among young people.
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Nowadays, It's very rare for someone to go to the movies. The reason for this is the increase of television devices and the sound system devices. It's like you had your own movie theater inside your home. In my opinion, another reason is the internet. Illegal downloads of movies for free from the internet is a practice that is more and more frequent among young people.