Correção de texto "English class"
- uaisatou
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I know that my english is very bad but I try every day to write something ;-; The text today is: English class.
"Today I have english class at Minds. I'm unit fourteen! *-* My english vocabulary is poor but I want to learn more, I have a little difficulty in the rules of grammar and colloquial form. ;-;
I like english so much and want to be very fluent! But... I think it that will be slow.
All my friends are formed in language and I'm a beginner. It's frustrating. I feel me very stupid.
Now, I going to take a shower and get ready for class!
Bye bye folks. :Dv"
"Today I have english class at Minds. I'm unit fourteen! *-* My english vocabulary is poor but I want to learn more, I have a little difficulty in the rules of grammar and colloquial form. ;-;
I like english so much and want to be very fluent! But... I think it that will be slow.
All my friends are formed in language and I'm a beginner. It's frustrating. I feel me very stupid. Now, I going to take a shower and get ready for class!
Bye bye folks. :Dv"
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- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
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Sugestões de melhoria para seu texto:
Today I have an English class at Minds. I'm at unit fourteen! My English vocabulary is poor but I want to learn more. I have a little difficulty with grammar rules and colloquial vocabulary.
I like English so much and I want to be really fluent. But I think it will take some time. All my friends know languages well and I'm a beginner. It's frustrating. I feel very stupid. Now, I going to take a shower and get ready for class.
Bem-vindo(a) ao fórum!
Today I have an English class at Minds. I'm at unit fourteen! My English vocabulary is poor but I want to learn more. I have a little difficulty with grammar rules and colloquial vocabulary.
I like English so much and I want to be really fluent. But I think it will take some time. All my friends know languages well and I'm a beginner. It's frustrating. I feel very stupid. Now, I going to take a shower and get ready for class.
Bem-vindo(a) ao fórum!
- uaisatou
- Membro desde: 23 Out 2010, 18:36
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Thank you <3
Até que não foi "tão" ruim pensei que tinha errado mais.
Até que não foi "tão" ruim
pensei que tinha errado mais.
- w.slayman
- Bill Slayman - (In Memoriam)
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Donay and Uaisatou,donay mendonça escreveu:Sugestões de melhoria para seu texto:
Today I have an English class at Minds. I'm at unit fourteen! My English vocabulary is poor but I want to learn more. I have a little difficulty with grammar rules and colloquial vocabulary.
I like English so much and I want to be really fluent. But I think it will take some time. All my friends know languages well and I'm a beginner. It's frustrating. I feel very stupid. Now, I going to take a shower and get ready for class.
Bem-vindo(a) ao fórum!
I would like to suggest a couple of very minor improvements to the above post, please see my rewrite below, and compare it with Donay's correction, then determine why I made the changes that I did. If you have any questions please let me know.
Today I have an English class at Minds, where I am in unit fourteen, but my English vocabulary is still poor and I want to learn more. I also have a little difficulty with grammar rules and colloquical vocabulary.
I like English very much and want to be really fluent, but I think it will take some time. All my friends know languages well and I'm a beginner, so I'm frustrated and feel very stupid.
Now, I am going to take a shower and get ready for class.
One thing to consider is that I have combined several grammatically correct short simple sentences with a common thread to make complex sentences.
Again please let me know your honest thoughts, and perhaps I can assist you in your studies.
- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
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Bill,
I like your suggestions. I think your version looks better, especially because of the punctuation.
Thank you,
I like your suggestions. I think your version looks better, especially because of the punctuation.
Thank you,
- w.slayman
- Bill Slayman - (In Memoriam)
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Donay and all,
Thank you for your confidence and compliment. My suggestions are not the only correct way to write a post, as my high school English teacher was fond of saying, "There's more than one way to skin a cat."
"There's more than one way to skin a cat." an idom meaning there are more than one way to achieve a desired goal.
see: http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/The ... skin+a+cat
Thank you for your confidence and compliment. My suggestions are not the only correct way to write a post, as my high school English teacher was fond of saying, "There's more than one way to skin a cat."
"There's more than one way to skin a cat." an idom meaning there are more than one way to achieve a desired goal.
see: http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/The ... skin+a+cat