Correção de texto: Friends over the Internet
- Roger Lourenço
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sometimes we meet people on the internet and become good friends ourselves, nowadays is too easy to meet people all over the world, sometimes your affection for these people increase and you just can't live without them, friendship is something that you feel, sometimes you make virtual friends who are better than friends in real life, sometimes this folks came from accident but you always thanks for that, sometimes the best friends are virtual friends.
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Roger, uma dica para você melhorar seus textos é primeiramente, corrigir a pontuação antes de enviá-los. Veja a diferença (sem as correções):
Sometimes we meet people on the internet and become good friends ourselves. Nowadays, is too easy to meet people all over the world. Sometimes your affection for these people increase and you just can't live without them.
Friendship is something that you feel. Sometimes you make virtual friends who are better than friends in real life. Sometimes this folks came from accident but you always thanks for that.
Sometimes the best friends are virtual friends.
Algumas correções:
Sometimes we meet people on the internet and become good friends ourselves. Nowadays, is too easy to meet people from all over the world. Sometimes your affection for these people increase so that you just can't live without them.
Friendship is something that you feel. Sometimes you make virtual friends who are better than friends in real life. Sometimes They can come by accident and you are always thankful for that.
Sometimes the best friends are virtual friends.
Sometimes we meet people on the internet and become good friends ourselves. Nowadays, is too easy to meet people all over the world. Sometimes your affection for these people increase and you just can't live without them.
Friendship is something that you feel. Sometimes you make virtual friends who are better than friends in real life. Sometimes this folks came from accident but you always thanks for that.
Sometimes the best friends are virtual friends.
Algumas correções:
Sometimes we meet people on the internet and become good friends ourselves. Nowadays, is too easy to meet people from all over the world. Sometimes your affection for these people increase so that you just can't live without them.
Friendship is something that you feel. Sometimes you make virtual friends who are better than friends in real life. Sometimes They can come by accident and you are always thankful for that.
Sometimes the best friends are virtual friends.
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