Correção de texto "Hello CL, I'm brazilian blackjack"

olá gostaria que vcs me ajudassem a corrigir esse pequeno texto que escrevi !!!
eu utilizei o google tradutor,por isso deve ter vários erros de concordância então peço a ajuda de vcs!!! :D

"Hello CL ,i'm brazilian blackjack ,i love so much 2ne1 and much more you!!!
I'm big fan of 2ne1 and you is my favorite member ,you is a incredible fashionista lider!!!

I hope you always smile, 'cause I'm always happy when you're happy!!

I hope that the saddest day that you remember that blackjack will always be on your side to cheer you up and move on, because we love you!
remember that you are the best!
no barriers for music!"
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Hello CL, I'm a Brazilian blackjack, I love so much 2ne1 and much more you!!!
I'm a big fan of 2ne1 and you are my favorite member, you are an incredible fashionista leader!!!

I hope you always smile, 'cause I'm always happy when you're happy!!

I hope that the saddest day that you remember that blackjack will always be on your side to cheer you up and move on, because we love you!

Remember that you are the best!
No barriers for music!"