Correção de texto: Hospitality

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The hotel was originated in parallel with the development of the trade between the towns. The trade routes in Asia, Europe and Africa, in the century age, give rise to urban centers and consequently the arise of hostels to serve the travellers who passed by there. In hte middle age, monasteries also were used to host the traveller. Hosting, back then was a moral and spiritual virtue. The thermal springs were foundational for the arise of the hotel business . The believe in the terapeutic and curative properties of the water took people to look for this places, and it stimulated people to make more rooms to host the visitors.
The hospitality as a business, arose only at the end of the century XVIII with the industrial revolution and the the evolution of capitalism.
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The hotel was originated in parallel with the development of the trade between the towns. The trade routes in Asia, Europe and Africa, in the century age (qual é a versão em português?), gave rise to urban centers and consequently the arise of hostels to serve the travellers who passed by there. In the middle age, monasteries also were used to host the travellers. Hosting, back then was a moral and spiritual virtue. The thermal springs were foundational for the arising of the hotel business. The belief in the therapeutic and curative properties of the water took people to look for these places, and it encouraged people to make more rooms to host the visitors.
The hospitality as a business, arose only at the end of the XVIII century with the industrial revolution and the evolution of capitalism.
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The hotel was originated in parallel with the development of the trade between the towns. The trade routes in Asia, Europe and Africa, in the century age, give rise to urban centers and consequently the arise of hostels to serve the travellers who passed by there. In hte middle age, monasteries also were used to host the traveller. Hosting, back then was a moral and spiritual virtue. The thermal springs were foundational for the arise of the hotel business . The believe in the terapeutic and curative properties of the water took people to look for this places, and it stimulated people to make more rooms to host the visitors.
The hospitality as a business, arose only at the end of the century XVIII with the industrial revolution and the the evolution of capitalism.

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The hotel was originated in parallel with the growth of the trade between the towns. The trade routes in Asia, Europe and Africa, in the century Y, the age of X gave rise to urban centers and consequently the rise/growth of hostels to serve the travellers who passed by there. In the middle age, monasteries were also used to host the traveller. Hosting, back then was a moral and spiritual virtue. The thermal springs were foundational for the rise/growth of the hotel business. The belief in the therapeutic and curative properties of the water took people to look for these places, and it encouraged people to make more rooms to host the visitors.
The hospitality, as a business, arose only at the end of the 21st century with the industrial revolution and the evolution of capitalism.
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O que eu tentei escrever foi:
As rotas comerciais na Ásia, Europa e África, na Antiguidade, originaram núcleos urbanos ...

Como dizer isso?
Andrezzatkm escreveu:O que eu tentei escrever foi:
As rotas comerciais na Ásia, Europa e África, na Antiguidade, originaram núcleos urbanos ...

Como dizer isso?


Ah! Talvez:

...The trade routes in Asia, Europe and Africa, in ancient history, gave rise...


https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ancient_history
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As rotas comerciais na Ásia, Europa e África, na Antiguidade, originaram núcleos urbanos ...
The trade routes in Asia, Europe and Africa, in antiquity (OU in ancient times), gave rise to urban centers...

Estava a pensar que fosse por exemplo com esta estrutura:
The trade routes in Asia, Europe and Africa, in the 15th century, the age of exploration and discovery, gave rise to urban centers
As rotas comerciais na Ásia, Europa e África, no século XV, na era da exploração e dos descobrimentos, originaram núcleos urbanos ...


In the nineteenth century, the age of agriculture = No século XIX, a era da agricultura
In the twentieth century, the age of manufacturing industry = No século XX, a era da indústria manufatureira
In the 21st century, the age of high technologies and progress = No século XXI, era das altas tecnologias e do progresso