Correção de texto "how poweful is"

Does this sentence make sense? Thanks a lot!

How powerful is the British central government, having in mind the funding, the shaping of the local policies and the officials who operate them?
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Avatar do usuário Marcio_Farias 12350 1 22 206
Looks fine!
Hi,
I've decided to change it to this:

How powerful is the British central government [b]with regard to[/b] the funding and shaping of local policies, and control of local officials?
Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
Mayaya,

I think the second rendition is much better. In the first I would substitute "keeping in mind" for "having in mind".

However this is an American's thoughts.
Avatar do usuário dlr 65
w.slayman escreveu:Mayaya,

I think the second rendition is much better. In the first I would substitute "keeping in mind" for "having in mind".

However this is an American's thoughts.


agreed 100%