Correção de texto: INTRODUCING MYSELF [4977]

Hello!

It's my pleasure to be here. I've been working as a teacher since 2016, when I started at a Bilingual School. First of all, I'd like to mention that I began as a Portuguese Teacher because I hadn't finished my English Course. However, as the days went by, I truly appreciated the process of learning and teaching English, and at that moment, I felt like "I want to do it."

Furthermore, I spent some time in the United States. Now, here I am, every day striving to reach a higher level in English, and I believe I'm on my way.

APRESENTAÇÃO PESSOAL EM INGLÊS
Nesta aula, a professora Camila Oliveira ensina como você deve se preparar para fazer uma apresentação pessoal profissional em inglês. O conteúdo dessa aula ajudará você a aproveitar melhor as oportunidades no ambiente corporativo. ACESSAR AULA
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Hi!

It is a pleasure to be here. I have been working as a teacher since 2016, when I started at a bilingual school. Initially, I would like to mention that I began as a Portuguese teacher because I had not finished my English course. However, as the days elapsed, I truly appreciated the process of learning and teaching English, and at that moment, I thought, "I want to do it."

Furthermore, (or afterwards?) I spent some time in the United States. Now, here I am!

Every day I strive to reach a higher level in English, and I believe I am progressing toward my goals.

* Especial atenção para a formalidade esperada em textos de apresentação pessoal (palavras mais formais, subst. De verbos frasais, pontuação, palavras por extenso...)